Aquatic Uncle in Class Response

Water versus land symbolizes the divide that separates generations. The physiological attributes that differentiate the land creatures from their primordial relatives represent their respective outlooks and attitudes toward change in the worlds they live in. The Uncle character’s scaly, sharp exterior mirrors his disposition and his antiquated attitudes towards the lifestyle choices of his younger relatives. While his wariness of land confines him there is an undeniable wisdom that underlies his point of view. He is a fully formed creature perfectly adapted to his old world. This confidence is what draws the protagonist’s would-be fiancé.

I immediately identified with the dynamics of the family gathering as they were presented in the story. Both parties could communicate, however there were subtle but essential differences in their use of language. The Uncle spoke in rambling, often confusing idioms and said things that might strike a land dweller as offensive. It is clear that while they share many familial similarities their respective reference points are completely different. As a result the Uncle feels unsettled by the change and the young ones feel disconnected. The Uncle's initial bitterness and general gruffness towards his family a reflection of this feeling.

The nature of the characters and setting would be well suited to animation. The fantastical designs of the land and sea creatures and contrast between their worlds would be great design fodder. If it were adapted, more exposition would be necessary and the protagonist character’s relationships and personality would have to be expanded upon. Much of the short story is spent getting the readers oriented in the world. If it were adapted a more conventional plot would have to be constructed around the existing elements of the story. Many of the conflicts are already present however they need to be expanded into full-fledged arcs.